I like your color use in this poster, the phoenix realy stands out and combined with the 'herboren' (=reborn) comment it gives a very possitive message. The only thing i can recomment is that the Delft Blue vase is not as strong color wise and falls a bit to the background, so maybe that part could be perfected. But I love this poster, the font and color feels almost a bit old fasion and then combined with the more modern looking phoenix it looks realy good, it has a message!
I Michel! I really like the metaphor! The vase aesthetics and the phoenix vectors maybe do not link each other perfectly but the composition is generally ok! Just a suggestion, since the topic was the color I would suggest maybe to use less different colors, so to give more importance to the one used and simplify the composition! cheers Alice
Hi Michel,
ReplyDeleteI like your color use in this poster, the phoenix realy stands out and combined with the 'herboren' (=reborn) comment it gives a very possitive message. The only thing i can recomment is that the Delft Blue vase is not as strong color wise and falls a bit to the background, so maybe that part could be perfected. But I love this poster, the font and color feels almost a bit old fasion and then combined with the more modern looking phoenix it looks realy good, it has a message!
Looking forward to the next posters!
Dicky
I Michel!
ReplyDeleteI really like the metaphor! The vase aesthetics and the phoenix vectors maybe do not link each other perfectly but the composition is generally ok!
Just a suggestion, since the topic was the color I would suggest maybe to use less different colors, so to give more importance to the one used and simplify the composition!
cheers
Alice