Friday, May 7, 2010

Visual narrative
Heidi Soedarmo



5 comments:

  1. Thumbs Up!
    Romantic and Story-teller!

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  2. ~VCD Team 13 Channelwing~
    I know it's yours Heidi~ Even I haven't seen your name^0^ I think maybe one or two picture is enough for this, three is a little bit more for one visual story telling, still remember the C&C -3...30...300?:p

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  3. Hi Heidi,

    I agree with the other comments. It looks very pretty and romantic. Hw the old embraces/makes room for the new. Both the human aspect and the architectual. Nice!

    Greetings,
    Dicky

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  4. thanks guys :))

    anyway, Xiang, 3 pictures in the below part are made to show the situation in the past, recent, and (hopefully) in the future.. ;p

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  5. Nice composition in general, but in order to respect the general simmetry set by the line in the middle I would have left just one picture at the bottom-left.

    Furthermore when you take pictures from stock images be careful to erase the cross they usually put on them (I'm referring to the people icons at the bottom-right). The same for the top picture (with le Inmagine logo), I think that if you cannot erase these logos you should just look for another picture.

    Looking forward for the next assignment!

    Alice

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